Monday, 7 March 2011

Second Pitch Reflection

From these notes that i have received from my peers i will change and modify my magazine as the feedback that i received was very good and would benefit my magazine a lot.  The positive feedback i got were things like "Represents the genre very well" "Good Colour scheme and like the photography" "Article looks good, set out well" "Colour-schemes work well" "Contents is good" etc.  Which meant that i should not really make drastic changes to my colour scheme as it works well and my contents page.  The feedback that i received that was constructive criticisms were things like; "model to saturated on front cover" "Maybe get more photo's?" "Maybe add more colours to add some depth" "Bigger Sell Lines? Difficult to read" "more content in contents" "subscription box?".  All these things have helped me as i have acted on these suggestions and  am now happier with my product as all these things have improved my product and made it look a lot more professional.

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